Reading Extended Essays 

It was both insightful and helpful to be able to see previous extended essays. The essay I picked up in particular was very well written in terms of: 

• Content - it was coherent and concise, focused on the subject matter. The student didn't waffle at all and maintained an objective point of view. Providing both for and against arguments. 

• Quotes/referencing - she used minimal direct quotations and paraphrased the most, which added more of a smooth flow throughout her essay 

• Structure - effective. Used short sentences, which may seem rigid but a clear way to get the message across, keeps writing focused and not overly descriptive. Point - Quote - Explanation structure.

• Conclusion - A simple summary, no new information included

• Sources - provided a variety, from online sources to books

Ai Wei Wei - Law of the Journey 2017 (Czech Republic)

• I personally thought that this was such a powerful exhibition as it is still in effect as of today. I find it fascinating that Ai Wei Wei would go so far to deliver the most authentic, accurate, detailed portrayal of the life of refugees. He actually went through a whole year of journey alongside these refugees. 

• It was overwhelming when I saw his exhibition in person. Delivery and presentation wise, I thought that it was successful. Through the scale of his sculptures, use of quotes, film, photograph, the snapshots of messages, news. They were all informative and it sure did raised my awareness.