- Well presented and neatly composed; clear, methodical work flow
- Variety in media, playful, expressive and minimal
- More exploration of how color can represent different expressions?
- "The use of animals was a really cool concept and I'd love to see more of it!"
- The practical work shows you always kept the outcome in mind, would like to have seen more diversity in emotions (have a collection of it)
- "Practice reflects a visual style you clearly enjoy working"
Thoughts:
- Just to add to the comment made about showing more diversity in emotion, I agree that I didn't work on any other emotions or feelings. But I think that this focused route allowed me to delve into the subject in more depth rather than being stretched to wide apart and too thin.
- I am generally happy with the work I've produced for this module. I wouldn't say I am super proud of it, however I am satisfied. I would say, I could have gone more ambitious? Adding to the suggestion, I would like to expand on the practical side of this module into 603, where I continue to explore this concept of visual language and perhaps make a whole series.









